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Can you remember the first time
you caused my heart to flatline?
I remember it all to clear
like my greatest fall with out the fear.
Do you recall the day where everyword
chosen to say and every phrase we dropped
caused us to stay?
I keep this thought on repeat
a thought i wont let go, a thought i want to keep.
Can you think of the months
where we pulled the most unforgettable stunts?
Getting caught kissing under the stars
riding in the backseats of cars.
It was you and i running through summer shocking the world
stunning eveyone in sight.
We had the world as our stage but its time for us to take a bow......
for now...
just shows how memories are the best thing of the past for some people but i dont believe in memories anymore(my last poem with lines of happiness)
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alphie0216 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005
You have such a unique style. this is really good. i like the flatline part. I also like how you used "repeat" as if you life were a movie. that is really cool. and the part about taking a bow. awesome! this is really good! great job!
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Love-is-vengeance Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005
Thank you! With the repeat and the bow parts i wanted it to seem like we were casted in a movie or a play ! Im glad that you caught those parts:hug:!!
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alphie0216 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005
yes, very awesome! you did a great job! :)
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Love-is-vengeance Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2005
thank you!
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