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A letter....
adressed to whoever....
this is the last....
time that you'll see this writing....
(the last chance i gambled with)
to fix the boken parts and patch the holes....
Im giving up on sending the letters.....
that no one cares to open....or to read....
i thought that this pen could solve my problems......
but this pen bled to much before it had a chance to finish my book of troubles.....
but the biggest problem....
(and number one on my list)
is me....
I found the reason for the disaster....
me being weak....
(and poorly peiced together)
they found the evidence that linked me to the crime.....
I couldnt find the words to show my innocense.....
(but there were none)
Im a carefully constructed disaster....
with devistation as my last name.....
and angel....
P.S. welcome to ground zero and the body count is one.....
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:iconflawlesssenseofstyle:
wow thats really good
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:iconlove-is-vengeance:
"and angel....
P.S. welcome to ground zero and the body count is one...."
this one? wait of course sorry ummmmm thanks im thinkin about changing that in my book of poems any suggestions? it would help
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~SubduedPromises Jul 2, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
i love the last line
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and angel....
P.S. welcome to ground zero and the body count is one.....
this line?? if so thanks!! it took like an hour of scrambling words around
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