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Keep selling me smiles
and keep your lips parted
so that everyone of your deniles
could replace your face
leaving behind a memory
in the form of a scar on my wrist
that i cant erase
(where you only a phase)
I know you liked it when i was wrapped around your finger
but i served a better purpose wrapped tight around your throat
(so heres the compromise)
I'll be nothing to you except the thorn in your side
(so heres where we part)
I'll be nothing more then a stitch on your heart
(severed all the ties)
heres the exchange of goodbyes
you wont have a part in the ending
because i know this wont be the last one ill be sending
is this starting to make sense
it does to me
because ive grown accustom to your absence...
:iconlove-is-vengeance:
a poem i found not to long ago and when i wrote it i didnt put a title so hence "untitled pt. 2)
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:iconbugdrool:
I know you liked it when i was wrapped around your finger
but i served a better purpose wrapped tight around your throat

--lovelove it; the whole thing really. :]
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:iconrequiemforanightmare:
this is really beautiful.......
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:icondrunken-dark-angel:
~drunken-dark-angel Nov 7, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
awesome, connor, very awesome!
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
(*were*you only a phase)
i :heart: the whole thing!
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:iconlove-is-vengeance:
Thanks jocelyn that means alot! :hug:
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:iconalphie0216:
strong, intense, emotional. great job! makes alot of sense. so intense the words have branded my mind! awesome job! :)
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