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Ignore the subtitles
and head right for the vitles.
I knew that depriving my self of oxygen
would lead to you letting me down again.
With the thickest of hearts
and our poor excuses for romantic starts
we'd end up separate
but somewhat equal in the end.
A ceremony we'll never attend
a love letter with a point to intend
that love shouldnt be something to send.
With the quickest of hearts
and our unforgettable favorite parts
we'd end up somewhat together
now and forever....
ahhh no discription..this is just be beggin to write again after a long break from it hope you guys enjoy!
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glamorousxtragedy Featured By Owner May 12, 2006   Writer
wow. how good. i usually like open better, but i like the rhyme.. its natural and doesnt seem to be really meant on purpose.
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tragicend Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
wow.
i like it alot.
good work. :]

:hug:
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Love-is-vengeance Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
shpank you!
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xparis-in-flames Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
ooooh I like this. :heart:
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Love-is-vengeance Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
thanks tori!
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Long enough break mister. :|
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:iconlove-is-vengeance:
Love-is-vengeance Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
haha i know retirement is lame!
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Did you fill out your ap mister. GET ON IT! :|
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Love-is-vengeance Featured By Owner May 8, 2006
hahaha! YES MA'M i did i handed it in like an hour later!
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner May 8, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
YAY. Good Job Conradddddddd. :salute:
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