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Tonight it's you, me and our designers who dolled us up to fit this scene
(elegance elegance)
Waltzing in circular pattern diamonds and pearls threaded around necks like nooses at a mass execution.
Romance is inhaled and exhaled like oxygen with a hint of a hallucinogen.
1's and 2's 3's and 4's minnoettes and peiroettes dancing to pretend we're happy dancing to deny pain.
(hurt will always hit with perfect aim)
Depressed with smiles pressed against teeth and lips.
Looks, stares, promises, and dares we dare to find what we call happiness on this dance floor.
(maybe something more)
This night was unwanted but still we taunted romances edge with the pledge of hips to hips.
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
:| you're really good at writing.
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:iconlove-is-vengeance:
thanks jocelyn:hug: ! but i know that youre ten times better@1
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:iconalphie0216:
This is probably your best yet. very deep and profound. great analogies and imagery. i think anyone that has ever been to highschool can remeber and relate. i espesially love the line about the pearls being nooses. that is incredible. the whole thing is fabulous, and made me feel i was swirling around on a dance floor like a teenager again with all those mixed up confusing emotions and back stabing jerks i went to school with. you are a very expressive and talented writter. keep up the great work! :)
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:iconlove-is-vengeance:
Wow!! thanks !! i wanted to bring that feeling out with this piece !! :hug:
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:icondrunken-dark-angel:
~drunken-dark-angel Oct 4, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
connor, this poem is awesome. i had no idea you had such talent! bravo, connor, bravo!!
:blowkiss:
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:iconlove-is-vengeance:
Thanks friend i never knew i did either i must be eating my wheaties!
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